Wednesday, October 18, 2006

pantoum

here's a really bad pantoum I wrote the other night while trying to watch baseball...

1. a. the River makes its inexorable way to the Sea
2. b. the past is irredeemable
3. c. the patterns of light and shadow
4. d. until the day slips into darkness

2.b. the past is irredeemable
5.e. casting shadows across the sun
4.d until the day slips into darkness
6.f. until the stars drop from the sky

5.e. casting shadows across the sun
3.c. the patterns of light and shadow
6.f. until the stars drop from the sky
1.a. the River makes its inexorable way to the Sea

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